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Flametail's Death :REDONE:

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WARNING: SPOILERS if you haven't read Omen of the Stars, Night Whispers

He felt numbness spread through his body.
He let his paws grow still, allowed the water to cradle him.

Such quiet.

Such calm.

He began to sink, gazing up at the fading light.
Darkness swept over and the sunlight vanished forever.

Redrew it because I hated the first one with a passion. :3 I'd say this is an improvement, no? Original: [link]

EDIT: Realized that Jayfeather's ribcage was backwards, and it was a BITCH to fix x.x
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So pretty! °()°